Thing is, authors like this do too good of a job making us dislike the MLs, give them too much unhinged hatred to make their revenge stories make any sense, that they forget about how hard it is to redeem someone like that.
Like, I believe them that their ML is an unhinged, hateful psycho who only thinks and cares about himself and his unprocessed sadness. What can you possibly do to make me think otherwise? To change my mind to thinking a grown ass man couldn't process this loss without torturing someone tangentially involved who was actually a live victim of the same person you wanted revenge on. It's a hard sell.
Lots and lots of rejection of ml from mc please. So much rejection. Mc needs to be alone. I don't know this Dr and I dont know the angle but as someone has guessed I think he's here for ml to save mc from. I dont like that but we'll see.
Thing is, authors like this do too good of a job making us dislike the MLs, give them too much unhinged hatred to make their revenge stories make any sense, that they forget about how hard it is to redeem someone like that.
Like, I believe them that their ML is an unhinged, hateful psycho who only thinks and cares about himself and his unprocessed sadness. What can you possibly do to make me think otherwise? To change my mind to thinking a grown ass man couldn't process this loss without torturing someone tangentially involved who was actually a live victim of the same person you wanted revenge on. It's a hard sell.
Lots and lots of rejection of ml from mc please. So much rejection. Mc needs to be alone. I don't know this Dr and I dont know the angle but as someone has guessed I think he's here for ml to save mc from. I dont like that but we'll see.