Had potential

yoinky sploinky October 20, 2025 1:17 pm

I don’t hate it but it definitely became slop for me since the pacing is super rushed. The poor pacing really made the son’s feelings seem so superficial which was only made worse when they jump immediately into sex right after meeting again. Even the “uncle’s” love and anguish for the father seemed so minor… the story had potential to be pretty good if executed well

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