The story, characters, the world building, all of it is so confusing. How is anyone able to follow this? Shouldn’t they at least reveal everything the main character knows about the world?! Each chapter has more new things to add to world building that the character is aware of, which can be shown earlier. It makes it so confusing to follow. They try to make if sound all mysterious but it simply shows poor planning and blandness
The story, characters, the world building, all of it is so confusing. How is anyone able to follow this? Shouldn’t they at least reveal everything the main character knows about the world?! Each chapter has more new things to add to world building that the character is aware of, which can be shown earlier. It makes it so confusing to follow. They try to make if sound all mysterious but it simply shows poor planning and blandness