Thank the lord this isn’t longer

Culoculpa October 24, 2025 9:41 pm

As the other comments mentioned - there’s no real plot per se, just smut and minimal conflict.
Thank the lord it ain’t longer becuz I can tell I really ain’t like the bottom one bit and he’d BE INSUFFERABLE if this was longer.

As someone else mentioned - even in the authors note the bottom isn’t even all that into the top, he just got swept up in his shit. That’s to say the top ain’t bad for what lil info we get on them.

You just kinda gotta infer that they’re both experienced, but the top has only been with woman and the bottom got with other people becuz he didn’t want to like the top? But the tops first love is the bottom, but not vice versa.

Idk it’s just not enough to get more info on them BUT THANK EVERYTHING ITS NOT LONGER.

Responses
    Room October 24, 2025 11:24 pm

    this was originally a short story but it's actually got a 2nd season ongoing now so maybe there will be more plot and character development

    Culoculpa October 25, 2025 6:48 am

    I just fell to my knees in despair.