Let me rant, I really can't comprehend what happened. I let this one marinate cuz it was interesting waaaay before.
Good plot from the start, very unique. Unfortunately went downhill. What the hell is that climax with the demon king? That's the weakest demon king ever seen/read. He looks like a incubus instead of demon king, he doesn't even look evil/menacing. And the hell are those fight scenes?? It's all over the place. That blond villianess, I thought she was smart and cunning but turns out she was dumbified, really girl you let yourself be known that early? And it looks like the evidence they got from wat she did was for absolutely nothing. (Well it did something behind the scenes, but still I thought it was crucial)
And suddenly FL got buffed with her divine powers?? Then why tf it didn't happen on the first timeline? She is the decendant of the saintess yet on the first timeline she can't use her divine powers? She could've least know from the dream she had powers or something. The mark in ml's face is a seal for a warrior? Ml literally defeated the Demon Lord tho, why didn't the mark disappear there?? It disappeared when they ****ed. And what's the point of having their kid as a warrior then? They don't have the marks too, ML got abused for nothing then???
I'm no author but atleast stick to the main plot and avoid too many plot hole. Author just gave us a god statue to explain someshits but doesn't really help that much. (Idk I just skimmed the chapters after the fight with incubus lord cuz its a waste of time.)
I'm disappointed, you could've atleast let us see the kid with black hair and pink eyes. But no you gave us the typical white hair babies, there's two of them!!!!!! Shouldn't we atleast have one black haired kid with pink eyes? They would look cuter!!!!!
Wdym Elder sis and Master of the Black tower didn't end up together??? THEN A BUNCH OF OTHER CHARACTERS HAVE LOVE LIVES INSTEAD OF THE TWO???? You have to be kidding me. Author's ragebaiting us at this point.
I don't wanna reread this one. I mean horray happy ending, ig.
READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.
Shitty climax, shitty ending.
Let me rant, I really can't comprehend what happened. I let this one marinate cuz it was interesting waaaay before.
Good plot from the start, very unique. Unfortunately went downhill. What the hell is that climax with the demon king? That's the weakest demon king ever seen/read. He looks like a incubus instead of demon king, he doesn't even look evil/menacing. And the hell are those fight scenes?? It's all over the place. That blond villianess, I thought she was smart and cunning but turns out she was dumbified, really girl you let yourself be known that early? And it looks like the evidence they got from wat she did was for absolutely nothing. (Well it did something behind the scenes, but still I thought it was crucial)
And suddenly FL got buffed with her divine powers?? Then why tf it didn't happen on the first timeline? She is the decendant of the saintess yet on the first timeline she can't use her divine powers? She could've least know from the dream she had powers or something. The mark in ml's face is a seal for a warrior? Ml literally defeated the Demon Lord tho, why didn't the mark disappear there?? It disappeared when they ****ed. And what's the point of having their kid as a warrior then? They don't have the marks too, ML got abused for nothing then???
I'm no author but atleast stick to the main plot and avoid too many plot hole. Author just gave us a god statue to explain someshits but doesn't really help that much. (Idk I just skimmed the chapters after the fight with incubus lord cuz its a waste of time.)
I'm disappointed, you could've atleast let us see the kid with black hair and pink eyes. But no you gave us the typical white hair babies, there's two of them!!!!!! Shouldn't we atleast have one black haired kid with pink eyes? They would look cuter!!!!!
Wdym Elder sis and Master of the Black tower didn't end up together??? THEN A BUNCH OF OTHER CHARACTERS HAVE LOVE LIVES INSTEAD OF THE TWO???? You have to be kidding me. Author's ragebaiting us at this point.
I don't wanna reread this one. I mean horray happy ending, ig.