The plot and concept is interesting, especially for me who likes these kinda things, but it just really pissed me off that the MC still ended up with the guy who imprisoned and used him as his baby mama.
The art was okay, the Seme's body looked really hot but sometimes the way they drew people looked a little awkward to me.
Especially the kid. Her head would either be too big or her arms were too short, scared the frick out of me when I found out she was only 3. Looked at least like a 5.
Also, I do not approve of the gentle parenting. She keeps throwing a tantrum when they say no and they enable her. I ain't letting it go just because it's a yaoi. It's also because she's not cute for me, at all.
Anyways, the story had a lot of plotholes for me. I know the idea was good, but the delivery was anything but. It's a little too unrealistic to let go of. Especially the part where the Uke ran off and went against some elite people good at fighting and handling things.
A grenade? Are you fricking kidding me? I don't think anyone was supposed to have access to buying that. Also, he bought those things with the Seme's card. Wasn't he supposed to get any notifications for buying stuff like that? Like, to confirm if his card wasn't stolen or anything.
Anyways, all of it sucks. There was a reason why I dropped this story before and I already had a guess while reading the first few chapters again.
Not gonna be reading this again, I'mma leave this comment as a private note to remind myself why I didn't like this story and why I shouldn't be re-reading it.
The plot and concept is interesting, especially for me who likes these kinda things, but it just really pissed me off that the MC still ended up with the guy who imprisoned and used him as his baby mama.
The art was okay, the Seme's body looked really hot but sometimes the way they drew people looked a little awkward to me.
Especially the kid. Her head would either be too big or her arms were too short, scared the frick out of me when I found out she was only 3. Looked at least like a 5.
Also, I do not approve of the gentle parenting. She keeps throwing a tantrum when they say no and they enable her. I ain't letting it go just because it's a yaoi. It's also because she's not cute for me, at all.
Anyways, the story had a lot of plotholes for me. I know the idea was good, but the delivery was anything but. It's a little too unrealistic to let go of. Especially the part where the Uke ran off and went against some elite people good at fighting and handling things.
A grenade? Are you fricking kidding me? I don't think anyone was supposed to have access to buying that. Also, he bought those things with the Seme's card. Wasn't he supposed to get any notifications for buying stuff like that? Like, to confirm if his card wasn't stolen or anything.
Anyways, all of it sucks. There was a reason why I dropped this story before and I already had a guess while reading the first few chapters again.
Not gonna be reading this again, I'mma leave this comment as a private note to remind myself why I didn't like this story and why I shouldn't be re-reading it.