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chp 23
yeah writing a mess. if you're looking for action part of the stories it's a total miss. the overall plot is decent and interesting but the execution is kinda... off? there's moment that feel like you should swoon for ML but I just feel off from it (starting to feel like the mc lol). it feels rushed idk. the concept for the ml is interesting but not done well. idk it's 5 am
I might eat my word when I learn more about them but this is the most frustrating ml I've ever read.