I'm like on chapter 60... And I know there are many comment ranting about but god I need to vent cuz what the fuck...
1. Suprise to no one.... The alpha is honestly a psychopath.... Dude Saerin didn't even get his scent under like etrememly stressful situations and torture.... But it was from this guy's abuse that he cracks. That alone should say just how far this man pushed him. And this fucker is like oH iT pIsSeS mE oFf ThAt He Wo'Nt TeLl Me AbT tHe OmUrIcE... Compared to what he did the eggs are nothing... And like I'm sorry but I cannot even fathom why omegas including Saerin (I think that's his name??) even like the guy after the shit they were put through... This guy was physically and mentally abused, was almost gang raped... and like after he runs away he feels bad cuz the alpha is sulking cuz his toy ran away.... Bruh get a grip and grow a spine so you can at least live for yourself....
2. I also couldn't really get how the alpha suddenly got feelings or like saw him as a person... The change was so fucking sudden. I think it would have probably been better if he realized his wrongs ater Saerin left... and went on his redemption arc when Saerin gets time and space to at least process everything that happened. Like he says I love you and suddenly he's down bad?
3. The redemption arc is.... very lukewarm... actually it's not even good... Cuz one like I said before the leads do not get much time apart... Bruh even when Saerin runs away he's still in the fucking house like what????? OHHH MY SEX TOY LEFT BOO HOO IMMA EAT A FRIED EGG WITH EGGSHELLS TO SHOW HOW SORRY I AM.
4. I know it gets better and the alpha regrets and tries to do nice things but the start is so Visceral and jarring you just can't see him as a redeemable character... Or at least with that shitty redemption arc. No matter what trauma he went through that isn't an excuse to pretty much torture someone. ( I know there is more to the redemption arc but again what he isn't something you can just let go that easily)
This isn't my cup of tea and that is fine but again what pisses me off is how quickly he changes and is intoxicated with Saerin. One chapter he's choking this shit out of him and the next he's like I WUV YOU I WUV YOU.
So... probably not gonna continue this... and might come back to see what kind of stitched up ending they come up with... Hope the story becomes enjoyable for other people reading this at least.
Final thoughts.... Beyond the Memories did it better imo. Alpha should probably go die in a ditch.
I'm like on chapter 60... And I know there are many comment ranting about but god I need to vent cuz what the fuck...
1. Suprise to no one.... The alpha is honestly a psychopath.... Dude Saerin didn't even get his scent under like etrememly stressful situations and torture.... But it was from this guy's abuse that he cracks. That alone should say just how far this man pushed him. And this fucker is like oH iT pIsSeS mE oFf ThAt He Wo'Nt TeLl Me AbT tHe OmUrIcE... Compared to what he did the eggs are nothing... And like I'm sorry but I cannot even fathom why omegas including Saerin (I think that's his name??) even like the guy after the shit they were put through... This guy was physically and mentally abused, was almost gang raped... and like after he runs away he feels bad cuz the alpha is sulking cuz his toy ran away.... Bruh get a grip and grow a spine so you can at least live for yourself....
2. I also couldn't really get how the alpha suddenly got feelings or like saw him as a person... The change was so fucking sudden. I think it would have probably been better if he realized his wrongs ater Saerin left... and went on his redemption arc when Saerin gets time and space to at least process everything that happened. Like he says I love you and suddenly he's down bad?
3. The redemption arc is.... very lukewarm... actually it's not even good... Cuz one like I said before the leads do not get much time apart... Bruh even when Saerin runs away he's still in the fucking house like what????? OHHH MY SEX TOY LEFT BOO HOO IMMA EAT A FRIED EGG WITH EGGSHELLS TO SHOW HOW SORRY I AM.
4. I know it gets better and the alpha regrets and tries to do nice things but the start is so Visceral and jarring you just can't see him as a redeemable character... Or at least with that shitty redemption arc. No matter what trauma he went through that isn't an excuse to pretty much torture someone. ( I know there is more to the redemption arc but again what he isn't something you can just let go that easily)
This isn't my cup of tea and that is fine but again what pisses me off is how quickly he changes and is intoxicated with Saerin. One chapter he's choking this shit out of him and the next he's like I WUV YOU I WUV YOU.
So... probably not gonna continue this... and might come back to see what kind of stitched up ending they come up with... Hope the story becomes enjoyable for other people reading this at least.
Final thoughts.... Beyond the Memories did it better imo. Alpha should probably go die in a ditch.