The story and art style show real promise but everything else unfortunately falls short. The world building could be great but there is no explanation around anything, one has to figure everything out themselves while reading, e.g. Knights having a “World” and how it correlates to their power. Scenes are just cut short, leaving conversations open ended with no resolution for the reader. The story just jumps from highlight to highlight. At times it feels like reading an old story which only focuses on the heroic actions and none of the personality or relationship building around it. I also suspect the writer heavily uses ChatGPT because these long ass sections around “blinding light” are way too often and often make no sense. The way it is structured makes it obvious that AI is being used. Too bad, I tried reading most of it but I just feel too frustrated to continue, no explanations no nothing. It’s just dumb.
The story and art style show real promise but everything else unfortunately falls short. The world building could be great but there is no explanation around anything, one has to figure everything out themselves while reading, e.g. Knights having a “World” and how it correlates to their power. Scenes are just cut short, leaving conversations open ended with no resolution for the reader. The story just jumps from highlight to highlight. At times it feels like reading an old story which only focuses on the heroic actions and none of the personality or relationship building around it. I also suspect the writer heavily uses ChatGPT because these long ass sections around “blinding light” are way too often and often make no sense. The way it is structured makes it obvious that AI is being used. Too bad, I tried reading most of it but I just feel too frustrated to continue, no explanations no nothing. It’s just dumb.