Wasted Potential

Xiao Vi October 28, 2025 11:54 pm

This trope and the plot was so refreshing amid the sea of masc top and fem bottom, but what disappointed me most was the forceful bj + fuck when the seme was just trying to be nice. It had so much potential but honestly just ended up being a problematic storyline. While I can still somewhat consider the main story being a porn short story, the author atleast could've put a bit more effort in building a bit of logical storyline in the side stories. Like I was really expecting atleast some character development from the uke? But unfortunately there wasn't much, and he's still using the seme like humanised dildo. He wasn't really was considerate of his feelings? And the seme here is pretty much under his own emotional manipulation. He just recently faced emotional backlash, and quickly accepted this guy as his crush's replacement.

I had some laugh while reading this but besides that truly just didn't like it.

If anyone knows more stories about renting boyfriends but a better version, feel free to suggest!

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