I REALLY like the plot and world but from a writing perspective all that exposition was totally told and not shown. It was a little jarring, cause why hear from a reporter when we can just jump straight into seeing the mc at work? I mean if this was a metaphor for racism, then making a whole segment about how a specific race came to town fifty years ago, but don’t worry guys we don’t hate you, would be really weird right?
I REALLY like the plot and world but from a writing perspective all that exposition was totally told and not shown. It was a little jarring, cause why hear from a reporter when we can just jump straight into seeing the mc at work? I mean if this was a metaphor for racism, then making a whole segment about how a specific race came to town fifty years ago, but don’t worry guys we don’t hate you, would be really weird right?