So they de-Twinkified him, gave him super chapped lips, and then made him wax poetically in his own mind like an edgy 14-year-old who just got rejected by their first crush... And that's it. That's the end.
If you wanted a story with an unhappy ending you could have just made him actually turn bad. If you wanted a story with a revenge arc you have to include the revenge arc, not just have the character quietly tell himself that he'll totally get around to it later he swears.
I didn't realize chapter 15 was the end.
So they de-Twinkified him, gave him super chapped lips, and then made him wax poetically in his own mind like an edgy 14-year-old who just got rejected by their first crush... And that's it. That's the end.
If you wanted a story with an unhappy ending you could have just made him actually turn bad. If you wanted a story with a revenge arc you have to include the revenge arc, not just have the character quietly tell himself that he'll totally get around to it later he swears.
Instead we have a story with no real ending.