it was so MESSY i don’t even know where to start this is such a waste for this kind of art style(╯°Д °)╯╧╧but since this is such a roller coaster ride and pissed me off mid story im gonna sum it up
i really hate the TIME SKIP, like what just happen in months, years and years. after one misunderstanding/problem there’s always time skip after which makes me confused and mad. it has too much of time skip it literally made the plot so dull
i fucking hate it when author make the first born and second looks like a MISTAKE, like why did u even think to make a baby in such a situation???? esp their second, they are not in the right mind and have messy emotions but this author was like “oh right let’s make a baby even though they are unstable” author could have add that in better circumstance and i hate how author let the FL acted like that to their first born, like if you despise it so much you could just not give birth to him! he deserves so much, it is not his fault that you had him while things are not going right. anddd while she was raising the second one she literally abandoned his first child which is i fucking despite the FL for that like wtf???? idk even know how to explain what i felt while reading that
i have a lot of things to complain but i don’t want this to be a long message, in the end author sugarcoat the messy story with the side stories wherein things have improved (but still lacking) and they are always in heat and i am not against that but it felt so rushed the author drag it too much, like why the fuck the FL realized those things after a decade (?) she could’ve done that better!!
it’s fine but not worth it..good thing i read this first here before buying the whole story, im only gonna buy the chapters that i like! i hope author’s future have an improvement on plot. good art style though (￣∇￣")
it was so MESSY i don’t even know where to start this is such a waste for this kind of art style(╯°Д °)╯╧╧but since this is such a roller coaster ride and pissed me off mid story im gonna sum it up
i really hate the TIME SKIP, like what just happen in months, years and years. after one misunderstanding/problem there’s always time skip after which makes me confused and mad. it has too much of time skip it literally made the plot so dull
i fucking hate it when author make the first born and second looks like a MISTAKE, like why did u even think to make a baby in such a situation???? esp their second, they are not in the right mind and have messy emotions but this author was like “oh right let’s make a baby even though they are unstable” author could have add that in better circumstance and i hate how author let the FL acted like that to their first born, like if you despise it so much you could just not give birth to him! he deserves so much, it is not his fault that you had him while things are not going right. anddd while she was raising the second one she literally abandoned his first child which is i fucking despite the FL for that like wtf???? idk even know how to explain what i felt while reading that
i have a lot of things to complain but i don’t want this to be a long message, in the end author sugarcoat the messy story with the side stories wherein things have improved (but still lacking) and they are always in heat and i am not against that but it felt so rushed the author drag it too much, like why the fuck the FL realized those things after a decade (?) she could’ve done that better!!
it’s fine but not worth it..good thing i read this first here before buying the whole story, im only gonna buy the chapters that i like! i hope author’s future have an improvement on plot. good art style though (￣∇￣")