Mary-Sue 100%

Gabriel November 1, 2025 2:04 am

Barely reading the beginning chapters and I'm already weirded out. Author has no concept of spacing, time construct. No signs to show how much time has been skipped or how old the MC is. Not sure they even know how kids grow/look or what they can or cannot eat.
No effort to earn or keep any of what they have.
This story is not for those with functioning frontal lobes or critical thinking skills

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