the story is very entertaining, i think the length is also appropriate - there are no successive misunderstandings and so on - though it could have taken a deeper approach in their work-life balance. the only thing i'm not so sure about is theodore's relationship with his brothers. i feel like the author changed their mind midway and decided to give it a more light-hearted vibe.
the story is very entertaining, i think the length is also appropriate - there are no successive misunderstandings and so on - though it could have taken a deeper approach in their work-life balance. the only thing i'm not so sure about is theodore's relationship with his brothers. i feel like the author changed their mind midway and decided to give it a more light-hearted vibe.