This story wasn’t too bad but it was honestly strangely paced (in my opinion). There was the whole architect thing, then court and stuff, and it was pretty slow and there was a lot of time about subplot for the end of be about LETS KILL GOD AND GOD WAS ACTUALLY EVIL. By that I mean the big evil was killed in two chapters at the end, and idk I was pretty bored around chapter 50-60, I just sped through because I had done more than half so I thought it would be a shame to give it up. It just seems like the story kinda takes a very different direction at some point way too fast. Like it was foreshadowed but it wasn’t left any time to settle. Plus the fact Vivi and Esteban don’t see each other much, it kinda feels like her love for him is sudden. Overall not a bad read but it could have been better I feel.
This story wasn’t too bad but it was honestly strangely paced (in my opinion). There was the whole architect thing, then court and stuff, and it was pretty slow and there was a lot of time about subplot for the end of be about LETS KILL GOD AND GOD WAS ACTUALLY EVIL. By that I mean the big evil was killed in two chapters at the end, and idk I was pretty bored around chapter 50-60, I just sped through because I had done more than half so I thought it would be a shame to give it up. It just seems like the story kinda takes a very different direction at some point way too fast. Like it was foreshadowed but it wasn’t left any time to settle. Plus the fact Vivi and Esteban don’t see each other much, it kinda feels like her love for him is sudden. Overall not a bad read but it could have been better I feel.