Has it's flaws but overall it's enjoyable

ABees November 5, 2025 7:02 am

It def has some flaws bc the author went heavy on the whump/angsty tropes (abused omega, mistreated by family, kicked out & starving, multiple sexual assaults, inferiority complex, etc), but the positives are Haruto being an absolute gem, the realism that w/all his shit Miyabi still struggles but shows his resilience as he heals & grows. The romance & chemistry is super sweet and the art is gorgeous

Glaring mistake from the author imo to do a redemption arc for the brother when the issue was as serious as sexual assault. It would have been more reasonable if it was "just" bullying (as brainwashed by the dad) : Tbh this story reminds me a lot of fanfic lol so I think it's a bit cliche/outdated & that shows in the author's approach to some things

Overall still very enjoyable to read if you don't take it too seriously

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