I think if this was stretched out to maybe 50-60 chapters this would have been really really good. I like that she is assertive and likes sex, and that he is expressive during. Not stone faced like most. The plot is small but good, just could use some more fleshing out. There is actual good chemistry here. Unfortunately just hard to shove it all together in 15 chapters. 8/10 !
I think if this was stretched out to maybe 50-60 chapters this would have been really really good. I like that she is assertive and likes sex, and that he is expressive during. Not stone faced like most. The plot is small but good, just could use some more fleshing out. There is actual good chemistry here. Unfortunately just hard to shove it all together in 15 chapters.
8/10 !