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Most of the manhwa I read that adapted from novel always feel like this, feel like it have potential but it feel like something is missing or the pacing is off T_T. But not all manhwa of course.
In this case it is mostly the artist and editing team in charge of properly portraying the scenarios, add any necessary additional segments to make everything more cohesive... The artist might be relatively new to drawing, idk... But i agree, the majority of the stories are not bad but the art is usually lacking ╮(￣▽￣)╭
This story has a lot of potential:
+guideverse with a bit of omegaverse (heat/saturation), +deeper guideverse lore sith the cup analogy,
+mixing in royalty,
+sprinkling some experimentation trauma,
+a strong bottom and a yearning top,
+interesting side characters,
+mostly action and drama rather than just porn,
+a good variety of character designs (characters dont suffer from same face syndrome),
+a dungeons storyline...
Unfortunately
-the pacing feels off,
-some of the emotional connections are very childish and/or lack more development and
-the drawing style is OK at most