Concept is interesting but the writing is kind of bad

Leeve November 7, 2025 9:13 am

As title says, it’s an interesting concept, definitely original in its execution…

However the writing has a messy pace, things happen without any reason behind them, some things are just thrown there without giving them any emotional weight, some are explained two/theee/four times.

It might also be a problem with the translation, but honestly not the best comic I read, better than some others, but worser than many more.

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