This is pretty boring, weak silly tropey writing. Uninteresting generic characters as of now, ah I guess if it doesn't get better in the next few chapters, will drop it. It seems kinda silly that uke would just forget about spending all that memorable time with his best friend because he felt bad at his leaving. His current reactions show no sign of past abandonment trauma either. He literally went to summer vacations, was in the football club with him, had winter ski vacations with the seme and just forgot all those memories just like that? Fr?? Writer, at least come up with something credible. He just seems like naive happy go lucky dumbass, like really who tries to remove sweat beads from someone's face? Tears i get, but sweat from working out? For real? whereas the seme comes off as needlessly stiff (which really makes him look bad tempered) for someone who really cherished his childhood friend. Like i get the author is trying to establish awkward one sided attraction between a gay dude and straight guy in a living together situation but they are not really doing a good job of it. Amateur writing.
This is pretty boring, weak silly tropey writing. Uninteresting generic characters as of now, ah I guess if it doesn't get better in the next few chapters, will drop it. It seems kinda silly that uke would just forget about spending all that memorable time with his best friend because he felt bad at his leaving. His current reactions show no sign of past abandonment trauma either. He literally went to summer vacations, was in the football club with him, had winter ski vacations with the seme and just forgot all those memories just like that? Fr?? Writer, at least come up with something credible. He just seems like naive happy go lucky dumbass, like really who tries to remove sweat beads from someone's face? Tears i get, but sweat from working out? For real? whereas the seme comes off as needlessly stiff (which really makes him look bad tempered) for someone who really cherished his childhood friend. Like i get the author is trying to establish awkward one sided attraction between a gay dude and straight guy in a living together situation but they are not really doing a good job of it. Amateur writing.