Wow, I expected this to be purely just a weird age gap porn when I started it, but this was genuinely amazing, although, admittedly very complex for the short time that it was allowed to explain everything with. I think the pacing was a little off, the first like 2 (i think?) chapters are spent pretty mundane, and would be fine if there weren’t only six available chapters to wrap everything up in, because then the last two chapters were just chalked full of information that was telling the reader rather than showing, so the pacing felt rushed.
Although the password was never explicitly stated, I assume it would be Kai’s real name ‘Leon…last name i can’t remember,’ because if not, you’d think that Cys would guess Kai earlier, but, Kai was also the name that he kept all these years and has a more emotional pull too, but maybe Merner wasn’t aware?? Either way, it was one of his names.
Then there’s the girl at the end, which is just so vague. Only through reading another comment did the Merner memories being transferred into this girl thing make sense, and I never would have come to the conclusion on my own, which means it’s a little toooo vague of a mention for me.
All in all, this was very good, but I really think it could have benefitted from a couple more chapters to really flesh out what the author wanted from the story. I think given more time, it genuinely could have been a masterpiece, because it’s already so good! Although, I do get that most manga are constrained to the 5-6 chapter limit, so I get the author was working with what they had. In any case, despite the flaws, I’m going to give it five starts, because the plot is so damn good, even if it is hard to follow as times and a little vague.
Wow, I expected this to be purely just a weird age gap porn when I started it, but this was genuinely amazing, although, admittedly very complex for the short time that it was allowed to explain everything with. I think the pacing was a little off, the first like 2 (i think?) chapters are spent pretty mundane, and would be fine if there weren’t only six available chapters to wrap everything up in, because then the last two chapters were just chalked full of information that was telling the reader rather than showing, so the pacing felt rushed.
Although the password was never explicitly stated, I assume it would be Kai’s real name ‘Leon…last name i can’t remember,’ because if not, you’d think that Cys would guess Kai earlier, but, Kai was also the name that he kept all these years and has a more emotional pull too, but maybe Merner wasn’t aware?? Either way, it was one of his names.
Then there’s the girl at the end, which is just so vague. Only through reading another comment did the Merner memories being transferred into this girl thing make sense, and I never would have come to the conclusion on my own, which means it’s a little toooo vague of a mention for me.
All in all, this was very good, but I really think it could have benefitted from a couple more chapters to really flesh out what the author wanted from the story. I think given more time, it genuinely could have been a masterpiece, because it’s already so good! Although, I do get that most manga are constrained to the 5-6 chapter limit, so I get the author was working with what they had. In any case, despite the flaws, I’m going to give it five starts, because the plot is so damn good, even if it is hard to follow as times and a little vague.