I think this would have been an interesting and better story if it were at least 5 chapters, in fact there are other stories out there that could have easily been a one shot that have 5 chapters, this is one of the stories that NEED 5 chapters, because in no way are you gonna just cram different plot devices within 25 pages and call it a day lmaoooo Anyway, this story was funny af to me, because all of that happened so fast, it was like 5 pages each for the exposition->rising action->climax->falling action->resolution lol
This story gave me whiplash ngl XD
I think this would have been an interesting and better story if it were at least 5 chapters, in fact there are other stories out there that could have easily been a one shot that have 5 chapters, this is one of the stories that NEED 5 chapters, because in no way are you gonna just cram different plot devices within 25 pages and call it a day lmaoooo Anyway, this story was funny af to me, because all of that happened so fast, it was like 5 pages each for the exposition->rising action->climax->falling action->resolution lol