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Thank you for this. I was wondering if I missed chapters because of things that unfolded that I didn't see happen
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Thank you for this. I was wondering if I missed chapters because of things that unfolded that I didn't see happen
The pacing and flow of story is so bad. It honestly seems like the author made a list of events they want to happen thoughtout the story but didn't link them together. The progression is clumsy, disjointed and confusing. Events unfold without us seeing it, and its just explained in one or two panels in text bubbles. In some cases, Sayi would be in one place in a chapter but in the next chapter she is somewhere completely different right at the start.
The plot and story is interesting, but its happening too fast, plot moving events happens every chapter, with no time to breathe or develop anything or anyone properly. The passage of time is also unclear, and because events happen without us seeing it, its hard to say how much time has passed.