I actually didn't like this in the first 10 chaps esp when it was just bad trans. Reading the official I actually binged until the end.
Like I said, it's good. Not great BUT not as downright trash never to see the light abyssmal as some others.
There is more to be done. The other cousin didn't get punished. We didn't get to see the closure with Yujin. Jeonghan has a lot to make up and apologize for. Their story can still go on to see the improvements in Iljo's life. His graduations and how they deal with Jeonghan being overseas.
For the bad parts early on, honestly, I don't mind the cousins thing. In the sense that as much as they always put it out there, throughout the story, it would have probably been glossed over. Although, I am talking as someone who felt that way even after reading it all in one go. It was good enough characterization that MC and ML actually know their boundary. The author even gave us, the readers, a way out. Since it was not as abrupt plot device as it can that he was adopted. Iljo's story and action still make sense.
Jeonghan's way of thinking and actions in the first half are still something he needs to apologize for. But it is dubious consent at worst, as Iljo stated multiple times that he allowed for it to happen. Iljo also knew that they were not committing incest despite letting Jeonghan think that.
I actually didn't like this in the first 10 chaps esp when it was just bad trans. Reading the official I actually binged until the end.
Like I said, it's good. Not great BUT not as downright trash never to see the light abyssmal as some others.
There is more to be done. The other cousin didn't get punished. We didn't get to see the closure with Yujin. Jeonghan has a lot to make up and apologize for. Their story can still go on to see the improvements in Iljo's life. His graduations and how they deal with Jeonghan being overseas.
For the bad parts early on, honestly, I don't mind the cousins thing. In the sense that as much as they always put it out there, throughout the story, it would have probably been glossed over. Although, I am talking as someone who felt that way even after reading it all in one go. It was good enough characterization that MC and ML actually know their boundary.
The author even gave us, the readers, a way out. Since it was not as abrupt plot device as it can that he was adopted. Iljo's story and action still make sense.
Jeonghan's way of thinking and actions in the first half are still something he needs to apologize for. But it is dubious consent at worst, as Iljo stated multiple times that he allowed for it to happen. Iljo also knew that they were not committing incest despite letting Jeonghan think that.