I think this story has some problematic things, but overall it was really good. I wanna say if ur not into pushy tops or stupid bottoms don’t read it.
To delve further into it -
The first couple I did like, but my god was the bottom tiring in some points. It’s like I kept screaming at my phone, DONT SLEEP WITH HIM! DONT! And he just kept pushing and pushing. Like it just felt kind of dickish to want to sleep with the top, say yes to his conditions, and the almost IMMEDIATELY try to skirt around them. Luckily, he didn’t, but his entire thinking process was stressful as fuck to read. I did like them tho, they were pretty entertaining for the first couple.
As for the second couple, the LAST thing I expected was his stalker/almost-rapist to become the bottom of the second portion of this story. The second top also gave suspect vibes, but he was just a “slut” At worst. He really, really wasn’t a bad guy even if he was pretending with the first bottom.
HOWEVER, I got to say - I also really liked their sorry. It seems like sometimes second couples are a hit or a miss and this was kinda hit. The fact the bottom was a lil asshole the entire time was entertaining, and seeing him mellow out was nice. And the top, HE WAS PUSHY and tbh he def forced him a few times. Sometimes it was dubious, but like overall he wasn’t the worst? As odd as that sounds, Christ… they’re both toxic but interestingly meshed well.
I think this story has some problematic things, but overall it was really good. I wanna say if ur not into pushy tops or stupid bottoms don’t read it.
To delve further into it -
The first couple I did like, but my god was the bottom tiring in some points. It’s like I kept screaming at my phone, DONT SLEEP WITH HIM! DONT! And he just kept pushing and pushing.
Like it just felt kind of dickish to want to sleep with the top, say yes to his conditions, and the almost IMMEDIATELY try to skirt around them.
Luckily, he didn’t, but his entire thinking process was stressful as fuck to read. I did like them tho, they were pretty entertaining for the first couple.
As for the second couple, the LAST thing I expected was his stalker/almost-rapist to become the bottom of the second portion of this story.
The second top also gave suspect vibes, but he was just a “slut” At worst. He really, really wasn’t a bad guy even if he was pretending with the first bottom.
HOWEVER, I got to say - I also really liked their sorry. It seems like sometimes second couples are a hit or a miss and this was kinda hit.
The fact the bottom was a lil asshole the entire time was entertaining, and seeing him mellow out was nice.
And the top, HE WAS PUSHY and tbh he def forced him a few times. Sometimes it was dubious, but like overall he wasn’t the worst?
As odd as that sounds, Christ…
they’re both toxic but interestingly meshed well.