- execution of the plot is meh & the resolution of most conflicts fell flat imo. it's tolerable for such a short story but i definitely wouldn't recommend reading for the plot - if i had to name 1 thing i'd rec this for, it's the white puppy. the artist absolutely excels in drawing adorable puppy poses and expressions - any other animal - as soon as the style was more refined than the simplified white puppy style - often looked wonky (spent too much time looking at the wolf's limbs trying to figure out if they make sense with the way they were bent) - i appreciate that MC was in his puppy form with the ML for such a long time in the beginning cause it meant they could get close(r) without them going straight to fucking. it also made me worry less about any SA or rape happening. the dynamic between them was entertaining for the most part and the transition from being strangers to partners felt natural - ML could've been a tad more pathetic for my taste but for what it's worth, he was perfectly stupid in love. appreciated every single love-struck expression on this man's face. not the greenest flag in the forest (perhaps i'm just branded for life but i couldn't shake off the feeling that he sometimes had the vibe of a typical self-serving bl manhwa top) but green enough. also, i'm a sucker for the dichotomy of a top being an unhinged killer around other people while being a dumb enamored mess around their partner, so there's that - the sex got redundant after the second time ngl and something about the composition always felt off
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- execution of the plot is meh & the resolution of most conflicts fell flat imo. it's tolerable for such a short story but i definitely wouldn't recommend reading for the plot
- if i had to name 1 thing i'd rec this for, it's the white puppy. the artist absolutely excels in drawing adorable puppy poses and expressions
- any other animal - as soon as the style was more refined than the simplified white puppy style - often looked wonky (spent too much time looking at the wolf's limbs trying to figure out if they make sense with the way they were bent)
- i appreciate that MC was in his puppy form with the ML for such a long time in the beginning cause it meant they could get close(r) without them going straight to fucking. it also made me worry less about any SA or rape happening. the dynamic between them was entertaining for the most part and the transition from being strangers to partners felt natural
- ML could've been a tad more pathetic for my taste but for what it's worth, he was perfectly stupid in love. appreciated every single love-struck expression on this man's face. not the greenest flag in the forest (perhaps i'm just branded for life but i couldn't shake off the feeling that he sometimes had the vibe of a typical self-serving bl manhwa top) but green enough. also, i'm a sucker for the dichotomy of a top being an unhinged killer around other people while being a dumb enamored mess around their partner, so there's that
- the sex got redundant after the second time ngl and something about the composition always felt off