This was easy to read. I like that I can relate to both YG and KH, at the same time, it's clear where things went wrong. Both are actually smart and self-aware (for the most part). And yes, YG has issues, but it's obvious he trying to overcome it, albeit he is lost on what to do and it's confusing to borderline scary (lol) for KH. Both have relatable personalities and behaviors that everything feels natural - not too fictional, if that makes sense.
This was easy to read. I like that I can relate to both YG and KH, at the same time, it's clear where things went wrong. Both are actually smart and self-aware (for the most part). And yes, YG has issues, but it's obvious he trying to overcome it, albeit he is lost on what to do and it's confusing to borderline scary (lol) for KH. Both have relatable personalities and behaviors that everything feels natural - not too fictional, if that makes sense.