the story and pacing seems too all over the place. i enjoyed the character dynamics and relationships but it never really made such a huge impact. some aspects of the characters felt a bit forced. this is around 50/50 for me. its okay but not enough to consider it well done. idk if it will change as more chapters go but with this kind of pacing, i dont see any chances of that.
the story and pacing seems too all over the place. i enjoyed the character dynamics and relationships but it never really made such a huge impact. some aspects of the characters felt a bit forced. this is around 50/50 for me. its okay but not enough to consider it well done. idk if it will change as more chapters go but with this kind of pacing, i dont see any chances of that.