Long rant

Hokipoki November 20, 2025 3:55 am

I like this but agree there should have been some changes

1. It’s really fast paced main event after main event. More slice of life with the side characters would have made the flow a lot nicer, and their love even sweeter! Like there’s hardly anything about them beating beasts or other beasts, and we don’t even see them in that form?!?
2. It would help if she didn’t call him Sunbae the whole time. She’s too formal with him. Like even at their wedding after that have a kid, and he’s told her to call him more affectionately/familiarly? Why?
3. She’s always a damsel, like she’s a beast person so they’re stronger than humans. Why is she always so helpless. Especially around those creepy guys.
4. Also I find the drama/how nervous she was about the pregnancy. I get the whole first pregnancy and it being new and scary, plus the whole mess with her mother in law that’s all totally valid and understandable. I mean the part where she’s worried if he even wants a child/will be disappointed in heating it from her. First he’s promised to love you more everyday and forever multiple times. Second he’s the one who teased you about having his kids after your mistake confession. Third they’ve talked about this topic on and off basically the whole time they’ve known each other, if he was really against it he would have mentioned it by now. It would have been nicer if she was happy and excited from the beginning.
5. More insight to beast people’s culture. Everyone is harping on how fast they got married and debating about marriage views. I think if we were to see more about the beast people side it would have made more sense. Also people are for getting that they 1 aren’t American, and 2 aren’t human so their views on marriage and relationships are different. Take culture into account please.
6. Fight with the Bitch mother in law, she needs to face some sort of punishment. Or alienation from them something.
7. Also it’s weird how the mother just thinks ML would go along with the divorce and would right away get together with someone she thinks would pop out babies. Like he already doesn’t listen to you what makes you think he all of a sudden would leave the girl he loves and just start making babies with some rando you choose? It took her 20+ years to have him, you think she’d understand she’d have better odds of getting a grandchild by supporting him and their relationship and letting them take some time? Like I get rushing it but the 1 year time limit and divorce makes no sense? Like from the beginning their stance seemed pushy but would let ML do what ever so they could get an heir. It’s pretty obvious that her actions would jeopardize that, given her son’s personality! It just seems like a weirdly placed/forced plot device the author used, without fully taking the characters personalities/stances/values/setting.
8. It was so gross how she apologized to the Mother in-law right after MC/ML returned from clearing everything up. Like they should have refused to meet the mother.
9. Like the mother in-law was causing so much stress that just makes it harder to get pregnant, and even after she’s just causing more. That’s just gonna put stress on the pregnancy, and affect the baby. She’s not fit as a mother let alone a grandmother. She should have been block from seeing her especially when MC was hospitalized.
10. I kinda wish they transformed into their dragon form and killed or sealed all the other dragons away. Garbage rage/family…
11. Why do we not get to see great grandpas death or something? Why are all the dragon relatives invited to the wedding???
12. The apologies happened too soon, and revenge/karma to all the bitches happened either too late or was underwhelming. Also the creepy otaku? He’s hardly in the story, and you already have a stalker. Also Therese so many creepy guys/side characters that we don’t even see. It would have been nice to see if ML had used his authority to do something about them. Why have him, other than ML and MC forgetting to use a condom?
13. Also who the F made these dummy versions? Like why?

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