4/5 HOT TAKE

Ruby November 20, 2025 4:07 am

I love the drama and the unrequited love and the plot line The second hand embarrassment was delicious

but I didn't like feeling like a pedophile reading this I hated the art for the MC and it's probably me coming off of a Instagram reel of why men like a certain type of women submissive small tiny cute baby face hairless It just puts me off And I didn't like the subtle comments of like oh I'm a girl when they don't identify as a girl, its degrading. And I always find it funny and annoying about the hypocrisy about purity Like they always feel jealous and mad they weren't the first At least he acknowledged it a little bit and saying 0h this is how you must have felt, still annoying though....

and I know a lot of people read Yaoi to escape that kind of hidden sexist propaganda cause with guy on guy we can separate ourselves from it and just enjoy it for what it is but this story it pulled me out a few times doing that

Also the love bombing in Chapter two I was put off 'cause I was worried he was a player but I'm glad that was cleared up in chapter 5 But mainly I love their story The saving grace was MC was actually a good fighter, I just wish the mc looked older idc how short he is and then they censored the last two chapters so that was also half a point off ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

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