Okay, I loved the premise of this! It's so freaking unique!! But I feel like there's no build-up with the villain... Everything was excellent except that part. It just kind of seemed rushed for me at the part where the villain suddenly showed up Like it just came out of nowhere... Umm, idk how to explain it other than that 'cause I'm not really eloquent Everything is happening really fast. I wish there was more structure and progression with how the story is unfolding. But I saw that there is only 83 chapters so I guess that's the reason why everything just seemed to escalate; I feel like the story board on the ending part was not properly calculated and they just had to fit in all these plot twists in the last idk how many chapters
It had so much potential though, and I love the humor! The ending just kind of bummed me out. Additionally, I think the story being longer would've been better; just to flesh out the emotions of the characters, 'cause since everything is happening so fast, the emotional development of the characters just fell kinda short.
TL;DR Everything is absolutely perfect aside from the last few chapters feeling rushed.
Okay, I loved the premise of this! It's so freaking unique!! But I feel like there's no build-up with the villain... Everything was excellent except that part. It just kind of seemed rushed for me at the part where the villain suddenly showed up Like it just came out of nowhere... Umm, idk how to explain it other than that 'cause I'm not really eloquent Everything is happening really fast. I wish there was more structure and progression with how the story is unfolding. But I saw that there is only 83 chapters so I guess that's the reason why everything just seemed to escalate; I feel like the story board on the ending part was not properly calculated and they just had to fit in all these plot twists in the last idk how many chapters
It had so much potential though, and I love the humor! The ending just kind of bummed me out. Additionally, I think the story being longer would've been better; just to flesh out the emotions of the characters, 'cause since everything is happening so fast, the emotional development of the characters just fell kinda short.
TL;DR
Everything is absolutely perfect aside from the last few chapters feeling rushed.