It's good. Both the art and visuals are good. The concept is also okay, even the pacing's fine for story this short.
It's just that, I hated the Uke. To anyone who finished reading this, you understand the reason why I don't like him.
He's so complicated and played around with the Seme's heart. It was like they're playing a game where he keeps pushing his affection toward the Seme in one minute and then pulling away in the next. Especially that time when he hurt the Seme by almost giving in to the other guy's invitation. Bastard was ready to embrace another guy while the Seme's chasing after him. Then he got drunk and had sex with the Seme afterwards. The next day he pulled away again, acting like nothing happened.
It's also frustrating that he knows. He knows that he's wrong and that he's undeserving of the Seme's love. But then he makes up some excuses like, "You already know I'm like this" or "Who told you to love me". Like he's blaming the Seme for loving him. Effin bastard.
I didn't like him when he showed up and I didn't like that the Seme actually ended up with him. Bastard didn't deserve him and the Seme also did not deserve to be treated this way just because he loved someone this bad.
For me it's a toxic relationship to be in. They didn't abuse each other, but to be in a situation where you constantly show your affection and your partner keeps pushing and pulling you around, hurting your feelings over and over again even when they knew you were hurting, is not a good relationship to begin with.
Anyways, that's enough theatrics. I love the Seme and the kid, but I hate the Uke. Plain and simple. The ending where he accepted the Seme is also a fast development and did not satisfy me in the least for making it up to the pain he put him through.
It's good. Both the art and visuals are good. The concept is also okay, even the pacing's fine for story this short.
It's just that, I hated the Uke. To anyone who finished reading this, you understand the reason why I don't like him.
He's so complicated and played around with the Seme's heart. It was like they're playing a game where he keeps pushing his affection toward the Seme in one minute and then pulling away in the next. Especially that time when he hurt the Seme by almost giving in to the other guy's invitation. Bastard was ready to embrace another guy while the Seme's chasing after him. Then he got drunk and had sex with the Seme afterwards. The next day he pulled away again, acting like nothing happened.
It's also frustrating that he knows. He knows that he's wrong and that he's undeserving of the Seme's love. But then he makes up some excuses like, "You already know I'm like this" or "Who told you to love me". Like he's blaming the Seme for loving him. Effin bastard.
I didn't like him when he showed up and I didn't like that the Seme actually ended up with him. Bastard didn't deserve him and the Seme also did not deserve to be treated this way just because he loved someone this bad.
For me it's a toxic relationship to be in. They didn't abuse each other, but to be in a situation where you constantly show your affection and your partner keeps pushing and pulling you around, hurting your feelings over and over again even when they knew you were hurting, is not a good relationship to begin with.
Anyways, that's enough theatrics. I love the Seme and the kid, but I hate the Uke. Plain and simple. The ending where he accepted the Seme is also a fast development and did not satisfy me in the least for making it up to the pain he put him through.