The only thing I hate, which is the same with almost many action shonen, is how the MC's group is rushing in with minimal or no planning... I thought you were supposed to be smart??? At the very least, please check who are on their sides it's like they're surprised every time someone came up.. and why does my boy rush into everything? I thought your character was supposed to be strong AND SMART, not shonen brain like this.
The only thing I hate, which is the same with almost many action shonen, is how the MC's group is rushing in with minimal or no planning... I thought you were supposed to be smart??? At the very least, please check who are on their sides it's like they're surprised every time someone came up.. and why does my boy rush into everything? I thought your character was supposed to be strong AND SMART, not shonen brain like this.