Sorry, I know some people liked these changes in tone, but there's absolutely no trace of the first part of this story. It's like two completely different jobs. I don't even recognize the characters anymore, and there's not much to read besides abuse and suffering. I'm dropping this now.This time jump was a big mistake. Good luck to everyone who stays. I hope this project improves in some way. Maybe I'll come back sometime... Not that it matters. Don't be offended, it's just my opinion. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
Sorry, I know some people liked these changes in tone, but there's absolutely no trace of the first part of this story. It's like two completely different jobs. I don't even recognize the characters anymore, and there's not much to read besides abuse and suffering. I'm dropping this now.This time jump was a big mistake. Good luck to everyone who stays. I hope this project improves in some way. Maybe I'll come back sometime... Not that it matters. Don't be offended, it's just my opinion. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜