haven’t read such disjointed chapters in a long time, nothing is connecting this plot together just gorgeous art and a dream. also the ages of these characters really confuses me like our mc references being an adult yet his dad gets angry at him because he thinks mc is plotting with his mother to switch parental rights over??? and school building looks like a high school yet they say they’re in the same major so i guess it’s supposed to be university? anyways i’ll give this a few more chapters but if the author doesn’t fix the narrative issues i'll probably be dropping this soon. which is unfortunate because the idea is good and the art is magnificent.
haven’t read such disjointed chapters in a long time, nothing is connecting this plot together just gorgeous art and a dream. also the ages of these characters really confuses me like our mc references being an adult yet his dad gets angry at him because he thinks mc is plotting with his mother to switch parental rights over??? and school building looks like a high school yet they say they’re in the same major so i guess it’s supposed to be university? anyways i’ll give this a few more chapters but if the author doesn’t fix the narrative issues i'll probably be dropping this soon. which is unfortunate because the idea is good and the art is magnificent.