The story could have been better. There was no redemption for what happened in the beginning and it progressed way to quickly to forgiveness like its just straight denial or something. Then the conflict regarding the affection was solved too simply, though that's not always a bad thing and it can be more realistic that way (not everyone needs a huge arch to realize they aren't reciprocating). Characters seemed OOC quite a bit too, here and there. Story could've been 12 chapters easily if written with the entire plot in mind, but the story feels more rushed and like the art was the focus more than not.
The story could have been better. There was no redemption for what happened in the beginning and it progressed way to quickly to forgiveness like its just straight denial or something. Then the conflict regarding the affection was solved too simply, though that's not always a bad thing and it can be more realistic that way (not everyone needs a huge arch to realize they aren't reciprocating). Characters seemed OOC quite a bit too, here and there. Story could've been 12 chapters easily if written with the entire plot in mind, but the story feels more rushed and like the art was the focus more than not.