I didn't like constant jumping between timelines, I think I would've enjoyed this more if story of the past got wraped up sooner then it did.... Or even if we saw the whole past thing first and than moved on to their present lives, idk.... I know many reincarnation stories are composed in a similar way and in general I'm not a big fan of it, but I minded it much more here - because there aren't true parallels between certiain events in their past lives and simmilar events in the present which would justify the need for that many flashbacks. There isn't much similarity between the two at all. And story of the present was kinda too uneventful overall. It could've been told in, like, four or five good chapters. And besides, I would like to know more about the supernatural element here and the trials emperor guy went trough in order to follow mc's soul, that would have at least been interesting and I would like to see the bastard struggle some more fr.
I didn't like constant jumping between timelines, I think I would've enjoyed this more if story of the past got wraped up sooner then it did.... Or even if we saw the whole past thing first and than moved on to their present lives, idk.... I know many reincarnation stories are composed in a similar way and in general I'm not a big fan of it, but I minded it much more here - because there aren't true parallels between certiain events in their past lives and simmilar events in the present which would justify the need for that many flashbacks. There isn't much similarity between the two at all. And story of the present was kinda too uneventful overall. It could've been told in, like, four or five good chapters.
And besides, I would like to know more about the supernatural element here and the trials emperor guy went trough in order to follow mc's soul, that would have at least been interesting and I would like to see the bastard struggle some more fr.