Let me preface this by saying I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ATHOR'S SMUT SCENES!! They are amazing with the chemistry between Yujin and Aaron! And this is really only concerning the current point that we're in (chapters 54-57).
I just wish we could "move it along" a bit quicker to touch on more plot points we've been introduced to such as Yujin's dad (and everything we've seen/learned of him), Yujin's traumatic past and if he'll open up to Aaron about it, possibly delving more into Aaron's past more?, will his dad "try" to get at Aaron "again"...and so on. It currently feels like wer're in a "we've lost the plot" sort of moment LOL. I just don't want the author to end up rushing to catch the plot up depending on how many chapters this will be considering we're already at 57. Lately I feel like several other fairly recent-ish series ended up doing this (whether voluntarily or not) and it just ruined the overall pacing at the end; the endings didn't feel solid. I guess that's my one critique for where we're at right now...we're FOUR CHAPTERS deep of only one smut scene so it feel like the story/pacing is "stuck" or kind of like a stand-still. Not a major gripe I just hope for more balance and if anything and equal amount of STORY MOVING chapters aftwerwards
Let me preface this by saying I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS ATHOR'S SMUT SCENES!! They are amazing with the chemistry between Yujin and Aaron! And this is really only concerning the current point that we're in (chapters 54-57).
I just wish we could "move it along" a bit quicker to touch on more plot points we've been introduced to such as Yujin's dad (and everything we've seen/learned of him), Yujin's traumatic past and if he'll open up to Aaron about it, possibly delving more into Aaron's past more?, will his dad "try" to get at Aaron "again"...and so on. It currently feels like wer're in a "we've lost the plot" sort of moment LOL. I just don't want the author to end up rushing to catch the plot up depending on how many chapters this will be considering we're already at 57. Lately I feel like several other fairly recent-ish series ended up doing this (whether voluntarily or not) and it just ruined the overall pacing at the end; the endings didn't feel solid. I guess that's my one critique for where we're at right now...we're FOUR CHAPTERS deep of only one smut scene so it feel like the story/pacing is "stuck" or kind of like a stand-still. Not a major gripe I just hope for more balance and if anything and equal amount of STORY MOVING chapters aftwerwards