Maybe I could've been more forgiving of this clunky story if it wasn't a romance, but because it is...
I haven't seen a couple with so little chemistry in ages, good lord. None of the "romance" parts felt believable. How do you fumble the main component of your story this badly?
That's not even touching on how the seme is a maniac assaulter from beginning to end and the uke is unnaturally stupid. Like he has zero ability to read people or situations.
I swear if this art wasn't so amazing (￣∇￣")
Maybe I could've been more forgiving of this clunky story if it wasn't a romance, but because it is...
I haven't seen a couple with so little chemistry in ages, good lord. None of the "romance" parts felt believable. How do you fumble the main component of your story this badly?
That's not even touching on how the seme is a maniac assaulter from beginning to end and the uke is unnaturally stupid. Like he has zero ability to read people or situations.