This started out very interesting with a found family and a mysterious tribe who dies if no one remembers them. It even had an enemy fake-out as the Boss enemy was unexpected. Unfortunately, when the officials took over, I started to see missing panels and the plot seemed to shift focus and speed up toward a bad ending leaving many holes in the story.
I agree with others who said to stop reading at chapters 85 or 90. Really don't read any further if you can make it that far despite the missing panels, dialogue, information, and events alluded to but never shown. (Issac)
Lastly, this story didn't require a ML, especially not an ML who was essentially the FLs father-figure. FL has two mothers so it's all right for her to have two fathers, too. I wish authors would stop doing that; it's gross and icky!!
This started out very interesting with a found family and a mysterious tribe who dies if no one remembers them. It even had an enemy fake-out as the Boss enemy was unexpected. Unfortunately, when the officials took over, I started to see missing panels and the plot seemed to shift focus and speed up toward a bad ending leaving many holes in the story.
I agree with others who said to stop reading at chapters 85 or 90. Really don't read any further if you can make it that far despite the missing panels, dialogue, information, and events alluded to but never shown. (Issac)
Lastly, this story didn't require a ML, especially not an ML who was essentially the FLs father-figure. FL has two mothers so it's all right for her to have two fathers, too. I wish authors would stop doing that; it's gross and icky!!