the entire pacing of the story was off. from hyeon suddenly falling in love with ian, to their separation and finally them getting back together was all whack. it could’ve definitely been paced out well within the thirty chapter limit, but the smut was prioritised (which is also evident in the side stories). i personally think this is a unique concept and ive only come across two other bls with the fashion designer trope, so it was quite disappointing to see this, which had so much potential from ian’s background and his success to hyeon getting into fashion himself, absolutely fall flat for the sake of sex
i did think they were both really cute crackheads and i love the artsyle as well as the characters palettes. however one thing that really stuck with me is how hyeon called his dying mother an obstacle. that was so crazy to me bc wtf
the entire pacing of the story was off. from hyeon suddenly falling in love with ian, to their separation and finally them getting back together was all whack. it could’ve definitely been paced out well within the thirty chapter limit, but the smut was prioritised (which is also evident in the side stories). i personally think this is a unique concept and ive only come across two other bls with the fashion designer trope, so it was quite disappointing to see this, which had so much potential from ian’s background and his success to hyeon getting into fashion himself, absolutely fall flat for the sake of sex
i did think they were both really cute crackheads and i love the artsyle as well as the characters palettes. however one thing that really stuck with me is how hyeon called his dying mother an obstacle. that was so crazy to me bc wtf