I genuinely believe this story had the elements of being better but ended up being just okay. Ian as a character was great. He’s amazing. I think the plot could been more engaging, more intense and more fun. It felt dry multiple times. I had to force myself to finish this despite my love for our boy.
I also think the bonds between the characters could have been better hence why we ought to feel more when certain things happened.
I’m not mad at this. I’m just a bit upset by some of the choices made here.
I genuinely believe this story had the elements of being better but ended up being just okay. Ian as a character was great. He’s amazing. I think the plot could been more engaging, more intense and more fun. It felt dry multiple times. I had to force myself to finish this despite my love for our boy.
I also think the bonds between the characters could have been better hence why we ought to feel more when certain things happened.
I’m not mad at this. I’m just a bit upset by some of the choices made here.