Okay. Y’all didn’t tell this writing is subpar

aggravated duck November 28, 2025 7:19 am

I did speedrun it but a lot of the pacing is rushed and skips vital details during chapters. The transitions between chapters are also sloppy. And the end of the story doesn’t really have a pay off. A lot of deaths are brushed over and not really given impact either.

The nonhuman characters in his team are generally likable but the one angsty mage (you will know when you meet them) is not likeable AT ALL, actually a terrible person, and was really just a nuisance start to finish.

I’m relieved that it’s over so I don’t have to be dragged along for 200+ chapters like some manhwa out there… but I wouldn’t say this was worth the time. 3/5 stars

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