It's so short, the ml should beg, chase, crying, and screaming more in agony. Mc feeling f...

Akane November 28, 2025 7:36 am

It's so short, the ml should beg, chase, crying, and screaming more in agony. Mc feeling for ml should have more development. I don't like how the author use "trauma can erase trauma" bs. Like yes ml is a demon king and he's like the embodiment of evil (should have), but author use one of the most bs actions that ml take. Which is sa. Like I want tension, terror, like the feeling you're fuck up so much bcs you can't escape from them. But all of those feelings got thrown out the window a.k.a "resolved" after just a chapter or 2. Mc csa trauma seems like a shock value and an excuse to use "trauma heal trauma" bs troupe but in a horrible way. The story is interesting, and I'll give kudos for the plot twist that the president is a demon all along. And honestly I find it bullshit that he doesn't know his wife got into a contract with 3 demons no less. Like come on.... I know he's just watching from behind. Overall they brush off too many serious topics that can be expand more and ml personality is too flat for me. Mc also become uninteresting as the story end

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