Art style's pretty good but the pacing is too quick + the romance feels sudden and forced. Plot feels confusing and unclear, like what exactly are we reading right now? What is this about? Just some bully X "nerd" troupe? Or something else deeper? Its giving more questions than providing answers. With some spice it would be good, like thrown in some complex human emotions, dig deeper on trauma and make the story more alluring, sinister or mysterious , but it just feels bland—like a boiled chicken with nothing on it at all. The only thing keeping the readers attention is the artstyle.
Art style's pretty good but the pacing is too quick + the romance feels sudden and forced. Plot feels confusing and unclear, like what exactly are we reading right now? What is this about? Just some bully X "nerd" troupe? Or something else deeper? Its giving more questions than providing answers. With some spice it would be good, like thrown in some complex human emotions, dig deeper on trauma and make the story more alluring, sinister or mysterious , but it just feels bland—like a boiled chicken with nothing on it at all. The only thing keeping the readers attention is the artstyle.