It's a decent story but very shallow. I think the premise is nice and different from all the other reincarnation stories, but it's also not that deep, and not in a good way, meaning the story feels very empty, the characters aren't that well written/developed and major events are just skipped over. The fml comes off as very selfish tbh, I understand she thought she was gonna die so she just did whatever she wanted, but I still think she could have been written in a way that doesn't make her come off as too pretentious, especially after she got cured and tried to get back on everyone's good graces, not that it made sense the way they just started hating her all of a sudden. Also that Barron's daughter (I don't even remember her name) could have been developed more, I love a good foolish villainess, but I wish she had more thoughts behind those eyes than just "I'm better than her, therefore I hate her and I should take what's hers". All in all, I've read better and more complex stories from 13yo wattpad writers, but this is just my opinion.
It's a decent story but very shallow. I think the premise is nice and different from all the other reincarnation stories, but it's also not that deep, and not in a good way, meaning the story feels very empty, the characters aren't that well written/developed and major events are just skipped over.
The fml comes off as very selfish tbh, I understand she thought she was gonna die so she just did whatever she wanted, but I still think she could have been written in a way that doesn't make her come off as too pretentious, especially after she got cured and tried to get back on everyone's good graces, not that it made sense the way they just started hating her all of a sudden.
Also that Barron's daughter (I don't even remember her name) could have been developed more, I love a good foolish villainess, but I wish she had more thoughts behind those eyes than just "I'm better than her, therefore I hate her and I should take what's hers".
All in all, I've read better and more complex stories from 13yo wattpad writers, but this is just my opinion.