It’s cute. Author draws funny facial expressions. Nothing particularly interesting in the plot but enjoyable. I feel like somethings are missing, like we never found out who was leaving the present and envelope in his locker. Still I enjoyed it and thought the dialogue was funny- I think friends would really speak the way they do with each other. Art is cute, though some scenes that are dynamic could be better drawn though. This feels like the work of an author who can write more complex stories in the future. Just tossing out my thoughts here.
It’s cute. Author draws funny facial expressions. Nothing particularly interesting in the plot but enjoyable. I feel like somethings are missing, like we never found out who was leaving the present and envelope in his locker. Still I enjoyed it and thought the dialogue was funny- I think friends would really speak the way they do with each other. Art is cute, though some scenes that are dynamic could be better drawn though. This feels like the work of an author who can write more complex stories in the future. Just tossing out my thoughts here.