This was interesting, but the MC's body proportions are all over the place. He just looks more and more feminine. What bothers me most, though, is the eyes. They're so small, and it looks like he is constantly looking above his glasses rather than through. The distance between the nose and eyes makes it hard to keep reading, I just want to squeeze their faces together.
This was interesting, but the MC's body proportions are all over the place. He just looks more and more feminine. What bothers me most, though, is the eyes. They're so small, and it looks like he is constantly looking above his glasses rather than through. The distance between the nose and eyes makes it hard to keep reading, I just want to squeeze their faces together.