Long af. Sorry, skip it if you want lol

YvonMarie December 5, 2025 8:50 pm

Let me just put this out there before everything else, these peps sure got some really rough pounding together. I've read literally thousands of bls over the decade but these guy sure are one of those thst do the do.

Anyway. I actually enjoyed this more than I thought I would. The thing is, I've read and tried to like 3p for so long. Often I read because I feel like reading smut. Im'ma be honest. But it's rare for me to have an appreciation with the plot of one. Why do I appreciate it here? Call me a hypocrite but because I never do think thst poly can work healthily. I've seen it happen to friends irl and damn can it get ugly. But reading this, it gives me an interesting perspective that it may be possible.

"Why tf would you say that seeing how these three are in this story which is only fiction? Imagine how worse it can be irl."

Well that's the thing. This is a fiction story with a shi ton of hard smut and rough edges but honestly, it's one of the most realistic 3ps I've seen. I've read so many and dropped many bl, bi, yuri poly stories and so many of them I believe had the same problem: they fit together too perfectly. With that, I want to especially stress the amount of time it took them to be that perfect so easily. I think it's bs. It's difficult for 2 people, how about 3? It's unrealistic. But here it's written well enough. I appreciate how the author brings up the importance of communication in one arc and then have them deal with that same concern again in the next arc. Why? Because we make the same mistake more often than we promise to not do them again. We see that so often irl, not only in romantic aspects.

Lastly (damn shi this is long? My backlogs of essays and research who?), I won't deny that these are some weirdos who are toxic in their own ways. But if I bring up normal and not normal, as a psychology student, I have too much to say about thst that this would triple in length. And anyway, they fit each other, one way or the other. Some puzzles get split in half, maybe for them they just got split into three. I'll think of them that way. I'm interested to see how this unfolds. Am I thinking of this as part character case study? Maybe.

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